Comments on: IMjots - Handwritten Jots http://www.dealdotcom.com/blog/2008/05/12/imjots-handwritten-jots/ Just another DealDotCom weblog Sun, 07 Sep 2008 06:28:16 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.1 By: Dwriter http://www.dealdotcom.com/blog/2008/05/12/imjots-handwritten-jots/#comment-3494 Dwriter Mon, 12 May 2008 17:14:08 +0000 http://www.dealdotcom.com/blog/2008/05/12/imjots-handwritten-jots/#comment-3494 The explanation of what these jots are was so cryptic, I had to figure it out on my own. NOT exactly the kind of sales copy you usually come up with. Might want to re-look at that. Some people may get that "jots" refers to jotting down notes. But will non-native English speakers make the connection with this explanation: "they are handwritten texts and drawings over professional ones" I'm a writer and English is my native tongue, but I had to re-read this sentence to gain the meaning. Add to that the fact that it's stuck at the end of a sentence (not to mention paragraph) that is basically "IMJots blah-blah-blah due to the fact that..." Come on. You guys are better copywriters than that. Or are you deliberately being vague because seeing an actual example will send people scrambling to create their own? Based on THIS sales page, I wouldn't buy. The explanation of what these jots are was so cryptic, I had to figure it out on my own. NOT exactly the kind of sales copy you usually come up with. Might want to re-look at that. Some people may get that “jots” refers to jotting down notes. But will non-native English speakers make the connection with this explanation:

“they are handwritten texts and drawings over professional ones”

I’m a writer and English is my native tongue, but I had to re-read this sentence to gain the meaning. Add to that the fact that it’s stuck at the end of a sentence (not to mention paragraph) that is basically “IMJots blah-blah-blah due to the fact that…”

Come on. You guys are better copywriters than that.

Or are you deliberately being vague because seeing an actual example will send people scrambling to create their own?

Based on THIS sales page, I wouldn’t buy.

]]> By: jmonegro http://www.dealdotcom.com/blog/2008/05/12/imjots-handwritten-jots/#comment-3496 jmonegro Mon, 12 May 2008 21:05:08 +0000 http://www.dealdotcom.com/blog/2008/05/12/imjots-handwritten-jots/#comment-3496 Ok, I bought this to give it a try, and it's a bunch of drawings made with paint and photoshop. But, if it says it increases conversions.... Anyways, I'll give it a try for a few days, maybe a week. If I don't see the conversion changes, I'm asking for a refund. cheers. Ok, I bought this to give it a try, and it’s a bunch of drawings made with paint and photoshop. But, if it says it increases conversions….

Anyways, I’ll give it a try for a few days, maybe a week. If I don’t see the conversion changes, I’m asking for a refund.

cheers.

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